I place my toe in the water. A golden ripple grows across the glowing surface of the lake. The lake doesnt normally attract much attention. Its set behind a forest and usually ignored or forgotten. There are a few people that know its beauty but this evening theyve chosen to stay in.
Misty and I strip down. I run and jump off a rock into the lake. I let the cold water consume my naked body and chill it like a thousand stabbing knives. I emerge from the water. The dry, summer air attacks me full force. Nature, however, decides it wants to be nice. The chill of the water balances the heat of the air and I feel no effect from either.
Water splashes in my eyes as Misty jumps in. Goosebumps run up my body as the water rises to my shoulders. Misty surfaces in front of me. The setting sun compliments the profile of her naked figure.
The water feels so nice, she says lazily as she falls back onto the water and allows herself to float.
Yeah, Im glad you invited me to come skinny dipping, I say treading water.
Its not skinny dipping. Its being at one with nature. She laughs. Its a soft, pleasant sound that goes nicely with the setting sun. See Kissy? Adam and Eve were created naked. Animals, a part from pampered lap dogs, dont were clothing. Thats all we are Kissy, animals in clothing. But right now were in our natural state. Everything is the way it should be.














Comments
I also really liked how you made Misty completely at ease with nature, and that it complements her. I could actually visualize the scene and in the back of my mind I could almost hear her laughter, which was pretty cool.
I can't tell, though, if Kissy is envious or admiring of her friend. Judging from the flattering descriptions, I'd say admiring, but I'm not exactly sure. Not that it detracts from the story; I just thought I'd mention it.
You could easily leave this as it is, make a series of one-shots based on it, or branch out into a story, with nature as a recurring dominant theme...or whatever you want. You're talented, whatever you do with it will be good.
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